This page summarizes the RTM-3 evaluation so every student can review their performance, learn from common mistakes, and improve academic writing quality. The feedback below emphasizes academic integrity, source accuracy, and operational clarity (turning analysis into measurable programs and KPIs).
Key Lessons from RTM-3 (General Feedback)
Across submissions, most students successfully followed the basic RTM-3 structure (keywords → business environment → organizational functions). Score differences were mainly driven by the following factors:
- Source precision (official vs. non-official documents)
Several reports used non-representative vision–mission sources (e.g., public information pages, secondary websites). This reduced analytical accuracy even when the writing appeared complete. - Operational depth: programs and KPI quality
Many reports presented “program ideas” but did not convert them into measurable KPIs (clear targets, timelines, and definitions/formulas). High-scoring reports were more actionable and specific. - Academic writing discipline
Common issues included overly long narration, weak summarization, inconsistent citations, and uneven formatting. Strong reports were concise, structured, and evidence-driven. - Integrity signals
Reports improved when claims were supported by traceable references (annual reports, official website sections, regulations, or credible business sources). Lower scores often reflected unclear references and overly general statements.
RTM-3 Recap Table (Score + Title-Based Feedback)
| No. | Name (NIM) | Final Score | Short Evaluation Notes (with RTM-3 Title) |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | SHAFARANTI CAHYA UTAMI (64250720) | 88 | Title: “Vision & Mission Analysis of Telkom Indonesia vs Digital Adaptation” — Excellent keyword extraction & environment mapping; function alignment is strong, but narration is too long and not operationally concise. |
| 2 | AYU DIA PUTRI (64250980) | 88 | Title: “Vision–Mission & Business Environment Analysis of Telkom Indonesia” — Good structure and function examples; citation formality and reference consistency still need strengthening. |
| 3 | MOHAMMAD BRIGADE FATAHILLAH (64250983) | 87 | Title: PLN Vision–Mission Alignment Analysis — Clear summary and environment; function mapping exists, but programs/KPIs are not yet written as measurable indicators. |
| 4 | KEYSIA OLLIVIA FEBRIANTI (64250984) | 84 | Title: Telkom Indonesia Vision–Mission Analysis — OLA components exist, but the vision–mission source used is less appropriate (public information focus), lowering object accuracy. |
| 5 | SAIFA RAHMA AZZAHRA (64250992) | 87 | Title: PLN Vision–Mission Alignment Analysis — Complete elements and relevant environment mapping; needs more specific programs and KPI targets expressed in numbers. |
| 6 | REIHAN ADI CHANDRA (64250999) | 87 | Title: PLN Vision–Mission Alignment Analysis — Strong function fit and relevant regulator/technology arguments; can be tightened to be sharper and more concise. |
| 7 | NAJWA AMALIA SALEHA (64251013) | 88 | Title: “Vision–Mission & Business Environment Analysis of Telkom Indonesia” — Solid structure with function examples; citation discipline and consistent referencing still need improvement. |
| 8 | SYIFA ADELIA MANDASARI (64251025) | 86 | Title: Tirta Investama Vision–Mission vs Environment & Strategy — Core values/value promise are clear; environment mapping is fine; needs more operational programs/policies (“what exactly is implemented”). |
| 9 | OKTAVIA RAHMADANI ARIANTO (64251027) | 88 | Title: Pertamina Vision–Mission vs Environment & Strategy — Complete mapping and critical notes; highly argumentative; would improve with measurable KPIs/program targets. |
| 10 | DWI ANGGRAYNI (64251028) | 88 | Title: UMKM Mie Gacoan Vision–Mission Analysis — Strong summary and environment mapping; function fit + KPIs exist; vision–mission is still generic, needs sharper innovation/technology angle. |
| 11 | ASILA KIRANI ZALFATISNA (64251029) | 86 | Title: Gojek Vision–Mission vs Business Environment & Functions — Complete and relevant; some programs exist; KPIs are still general, not written with concrete standards/targets. |
| 12 | BUNGA PRATIWI (64251034) | 87 | Title: PLN Vision–Mission Alignment Analysis — Environment and functions align; needs more specific programs and measurable indicators. |
| 13 | INTAN NURUL AINI (64251036) | 88 | Title: “Vision–Mission & Business Environment Analysis of Telkom Indonesia” — Solid content and structure; needs stronger formal citations and consistent reference management. |
| 14 | WANDA AYU RIZKIANI (64251047) | 86 | Title: Tirta Investama Vision–Mission Analysis — Extraction and environment mapping are good; programs/policies still lack operational detail. |
| 15 | LATIFAH ATTAZKIYYAH (64251048) | 86 | Title: Gojek Vision–Mission Evaluation — Environment and functions are complete; KPI targets are not yet quantitative (need numbers/standards). |
| 16 | MUHAMMAD DICKY RAIHAN (64251049) | 84 | Title: Telkom Vision–Mission Analysis — Mapping exists; but the vision–mission source is not precise enough, lowering overall analysis quality. |
| 17 | FERNANDO WIJAYA (64251056) | 84 | Title: Telkom Vision–Mission Analysis — Basic structure exists; source basis is less appropriate and writing remains descriptive (needs sharper critical alignment). |
| 18 | MUHAMAD RIZKY ALBIANSYAH YUSUF (64251066) | 86 | Title: Gojek Vision–Mission Evaluation — Complete elements; strong competitor–regulator–technology relevance; needs more concrete internal policy examples + KPIs. |
| 19 | NAYLA MOZZA AZAHRA (64251071) | 87 | Title: PLN Vision–Mission Alignment Analysis — Neat and relevant; program examples can be made more concrete. |
| 20 | JELITA WAHYU NINGSIH (64251073) | 84 | Title: Telkom Vision–Mission Analysis — Function mapping exists; vision–mission source is less precise, so core-business alignment is not well captured. |
| 21 | OLYVIA RAMADHANI (64251079) | 84 | Title: Telkom Vision–Mission Analysis — Functions and programs exist, but the chosen vision–mission document is not representative, causing misalignment. |
| 22 | FITRIYYATUL AZZIZAH (64251087) | 85 | Title: Warceng Vision–Mission vs Environment & Functions — Complete structure; competitors/technology mapping exists; digital recommendations are not turned into measurable programs. |
| 23 | DEFA SANDI SANJAYA (64251088) | 88 | Title: Pertamina Vision–Mission Alignment — Strong critical notes and structured mapping; still minimal in quantitative KPI/program formulation. |
| 24 | MIKO RAFAEL HUTAPEA (64251091) | 73 | Title: Minimarket Vision–Mission vs Environment & Strategy — Many parts remain too general/unfinished; depth and reference integrity are not strong yet. |
| 25 | MADRIDTYA SUCI RAMADHANI NUR AMALIA (64251097) | 86 | Title: Gojek Vision–Mission Evaluation — Strong structure and relevance; needs more specific KPIs and internal policy examples. |
| 26 | RIVANA SAFITRI (64251100) | 73 | Title: Minimarket Vision–Mission vs Environment & Strategy — Too general/incomplete sections; limited analytical depth and weak reference integrity signals. |
| 27 | LUTHFIYAH WASILATUN SYAFIIQOH (64251102) | 85 | Title: Warceng Vision–Mission Evaluation — Clear mapping; differentiation and technology strategy not yet converted into a firm program plan. |
| 28 | MUHAMMAD DAFARIDZA (64251106) | 88 | Title: UMKM Mie Gacoan Vision–Mission Analysis — Strong function programs + KPIs; environment mapping is complete; could be shorter and more critical on innovation/tech. |
| 29 | AURELLIA PUTRI HERLAMBANG (64251107) | 88 | Title: Pertamina Vision–Mission Alignment — Very neat mapping and strong critical notes; KPI/programs need more quantitative targets. |
| 30 | INTAN NUR AINI (64251112) | 87 | Title: PLN Vision–Mission Alignment Analysis — Keyword extraction and environment are relevant; program/KPI examples are not yet highly specific. |
| 31 | RATNA AGUSTINA (64251119) | 85 | Title: Warceng Vision–Mission Evaluation — Structure and mapping are good; technology strategy is still general (not yet an action plan). |
| 32 | RACHEL ELISABETH HERWANTO (64251121) | 88 | Title: UMKM Mie Gacoan Vision–Mission Analysis — Systematic analysis; strong mapping; recommendations on innovation/tech need clearer program form. |
| 33 | ADITYA TIRTANA AMRULLAH (64251122) | 87 | Title: PLN Vision–Mission Alignment Analysis — Complete function fit; good regulator/tech argument; KPI needs clearer measurable targets. |
| 34 | ANDINI NERINDRA PUTRI (64251124) | 73 | Title: Minimarket Vision–Mission vs Environment & Strategy — Many sections are too general/incomplete; reference integrity and depth are still weak. |
| 35 | NATASYA ZULAIKA IRRAYYA (64251134) | 88 | Title: UMKM Mie Gacoan Vision–Mission Analysis — Complete components + KPIs per function; innovation/tech recommendations need firmer programs. |
| 36 | YULLIA HASBITA PUTRI (64251140) | 86 | Title: Tirta Investama Vision–Mission Analysis — Good extraction and mapping; needs more specific operational programs. |
| 37 | FIOLA AMANDA ZENA (64251141) | 87 | Title: Bank Mandiri Vision–Mission: Digital Transformation & Sustainable Finance — Strong direction and context; function alignment is not fully developed (too conceptual). |
| 38 | APRILIA HARGENI (64251154) | 88 | Title: “Vision–Mission & Business Environment Analysis of Telkom Indonesia” — Solid structure and programs; formal citation consistency still needs improvement. |
| 39 | AISYAH NURHASANAH (64251159) | 84 | Title: Telkom Vision–Mission Analysis — Function structure exists; vision–mission document is not representative (public info focus), lowering accuracy. |
| 40 | RIZKA AMELIA (64251161) | 88 | Title: UMKM Mie Gacoan Vision–Mission Analysis — Strong summary and mapping; functions and KPIs per division are clear. |
| 41 | MUHAMAD AL FAKHRI (64251172) | 87 | Title: Bank Mandiri Vision–Mission Alignment — Good keyword/context vs fintech disruption; function alignment needs more concrete program examples. |
| 42 | MUHAMAD RIANSYAH (64251174) | 73 | Title: Minimarket Vision–Mission vs Environment & Strategy — Too general/incomplete; limited analytical depth and weak integrity signals. |
| 43 | MAYA S.R SIMANJUNTAK (64251177) | 85 | Title: Warceng Vision–Mission Evaluation — Customer/competitor/regulator/tech exists; digital strategy and differentiation are not operationally defined. |
| 44 | DINI CAHAYA INDAH PUTRI (64251184) | 85 | Title: Warceng Vision–Mission Evaluation — Fairly critical; technology and implementation programs are not yet firm/measurable. |
| 45 | KARINA VEGA AZAHRA (64251202) | 86 | Title: Tirta Investama Vision–Mission Analysis — Values and strategic direction are clear; needs more concrete programs/policies. |
| 46 | REIFAN NOVAL FADILLAH (64251216) | 73 | Title: Minimarket Vision–Mission vs Environment & Strategy — Too general/incomplete; depth and integrity of references still weak. |
| 47 | PINKAN PERMATA SURGANI (64251220) | 88 | Title: “Vision–Mission & Business Environment Analysis of Telkom Indonesia” — Complete structure; needs stronger citation discipline and consistency. |
| 48 | NAZWA AMELIA (64251229) | 88 | Title: UMKM Mie Gacoan Vision–Mission Analysis — Clear extraction and mapping; KPIs are neat; innovation/tech suggestions can be sharper. |
| 49 | YOGA PANGESTU (64251239) | 87 | Title: Bank Mandiri Vision–Mission Alignment — Strong digital/sustainable direction; function alignment still incomplete. |
| 50 | RASHYA ALDINO (64251245) | 87 | Title: Bank Mandiri Vision–Mission Alignment — Good disruption context; organizational function detail is still limited. |
| 51 | ZAZKIA EKA PRATIWI (64251249) | 87 | Title: Bank Mandiri Vision–Mission Alignment — Neat keyword analysis; internal function/program examples are not complete yet. |
| 52 | ANITA INNA MARSELA (64251252) | 87 | Title: Bank Mandiri Vision–Mission Alignment — Relevant environment mapping; needs fuller function alignment (marketing–ops–HR–finance). |
| 53 | DWI ARYADIKA (64251262) | 88 | Title: Pertamina Vision–Mission Alignment — Strong customer/competitor/regulator/tech logic; good critical notes; KPI remains weak. |
| 54 | DAFA DWI RADJA (64251266) | 88 | Title: Pertamina Vision–Mission Alignment — Complete structure and relevant critiques; needs measurable KPIs/program targets. |
| 55 | RAISAH FAUZIAH MUDIYANTI (64251272) | 85 | Title: Warceng Vision–Mission Evaluation — Structure is clear; differentiation/digitalization not yet converted into measurable action steps. |
| 56 | STEVEN CHRISTOPER SIMAMORA (64251280) | 86 | Title: Tirta Investama Vision–Mission Alignment — Good structure; needs more operational and specific program examples. |
| 57 | MUHAMAD HABIBI FADILAH (64251283) | 86 | Title: Tirta Investama Vision–Mission Alignment — Good extraction; operational programs/policies can be deepened. |
| 58 | PUTRA ILHAM PRATAMA (64251286) | 86 | Title: Gojek Vision–Mission Evaluation — Relevant analysis; needs more quantitative KPIs and internal policy specificity. |
| 59 | SUCI (64251299) | 88 | Title: Pertamina Vision–Mission Alignment — Strong structure and critiques; quantitative KPI/programs remain limited. |
| 60 | SALSABIL HAURA SABRINNA (64251307) | 86 | Title: Gojek Vision–Mission Evaluation — Clear environment mapping; program examples exist; KPIs not yet written as numeric targets. |
| 61 | MAULINDA SAVITRI (64251312) | 88 | Title: “Vision–Mission & Business Environment Analysis of Telkom Indonesia” — Complete structure; needs better formal citation consistency. |
| 62 | RIZKY FIRDAUS RAMADHAN (64251323) | 88 | Title: Telkom Vision–Mission Alignment — Complete and analytical; link between vision–mission, environment, and functions is clear; reference formatting still needs cleanup. |
| 63 | NABILLAH NUR KHADIJAH (64251334) | 86 | Title: “Vision–Mission Role in Supporting KAI Strategy” — Complete core components; needs stronger referencing for key claims and strategy statements. |
| 64 | MUHAMMAD RAIHAN PUTRA LAKSONO (64251350) | 84 | Title: “Business Management Paper (PLN)” — Relevant narrative; keyword extraction and program/KPI examples are still not operational enough. |
| 65 | ZAENAL AHYAR (64251351) | 84 | Title: “Business Management Paper (PLN)” — Similar: relevant narrative; lacks sharp keyword extraction and operational KPI/programs. |
| 66 | NADJWA LAURA ADINDA (64251356) | 86 | Title: “Vision–Mission Role in Supporting KAI Strategy” — Core components align; needs stronger evidence-based referencing. |
| 67 | VITO MAGHNAR KUSDARMONO (64251358) | 70 | Title: “Pertamina Business Strategy Vision–Mission” — Shifts into theory/method; environment & function sections incomplete, not meeting RTM-3 structure. |
| 68 | CHAIRANI SYARIF (64251361) | 86 | Title: “Vision–Mission Role in Supporting KAI Strategy” — Solid structure; needs stronger citations for claims and strategies. |
| 69 | AULIYA DIYAH SEKARARUM (64251390) | 88 | Title: Telkom vs Digital Adaptation — Very detailed mapping; needs summarization and sharper recommendations. |
| 70 | DIAN WAHYU SEPTIASARI (64251430) | 85 | Title: Alfamart Alignment Analysis — Meets components; needs stronger source proof and more analytical elaboration. |
| 71 | DEVINA AYU NAYSILA (64251454) | 80 | Title: Telkom Strategy Management Analysis — Relevant and has program examples; keyword extraction and competitor/regulator mapping are incomplete. |
| 72 | MUHAMMAD DAFFA PRIBADI (64251455) | 70 | Title: Pertamina Vision–Mission Strategy — Drifts to theory/method; environment & function sections incomplete. |
| 73 | ILHAM RAMADADHAN (64251463) | 84 | Title: “Business Management Paper (PLN)” — Relevant but still weak on sharp keyword extraction and operational KPI/program examples. |
| 74 | MEIKA KIRANA SUDIRMAN (64251466) | — | — |
| 75 | SIRIN RUWAYDA (64251468) | 82 | Title: “BUMN Vision–Mission Alignment” — Core structure exists; function programs remain generic and weakly tied to vision–mission. |
| 76 | AHMAD SULTAN DEWANTARA (64251469) | 70 | Title: Pertamina Vision–Mission Strategy — Drifts to theory/method; environment & function incomplete. |
| 77 | AISYAH (64251472) | 80 | Title: Telkom Strategy Management Analysis — Similar: relevant but incomplete in keyword extraction and competitor/regulator mapping. |
| 78 | ALIFA RIZKY ARDIANTI (64251473) | 82 | Title: “BUMN Vision–Mission Alignment” — Structure exists; programs remain generic and not strongly tied to vision–mission. |
| 79 | HAFNAN FAUZI (64251492) | — | — |
| 80 | ARDHIA GARINI PRATIWI ALAM (64251500) | 88 | Title: Telkom vs Digital Adaptation — Comprehensive mapping; recommendations should be converted into programs/KPIs. |
| 81 | DESI NUR AULIA PUTRI (64251502) | 80 | Title: Telkom Strategy Management Analysis — Relevant but weak on keyword extraction and competitor/regulator mapping completeness. |
| 82 | WIDIAH ASMA FADILAH (64251507) | 85 | Title: Alfamart Alignment Analysis — Meets structure; needs stronger source proof and more analytical depth. |
| 83 | SHALMA FHADDILLAH SUNARI (64251509) | 85 | Title: Alfamart Alignment Analysis — Similar: structured; needs stronger sourcing and deeper analysis. |
| 84 | ADELA PUTRI (64251515) | 82 | Title: “BUMN Vision–Mission Alignment” — Structure exists; programs remain generic and not tightly linked to vision–mission. |
| 85 | VIOLA SEPTIYANTI PUTRI SUWANDA (64251528) | 80 | Title: Telkom Strategy Management Analysis — Relevant but incomplete on keyword extraction and competitor/regulator mapping. |
| 86 | ALIFA WINDU CAHYANI (64251531) | 82 | Title: “BUMN Vision–Mission Alignment” — Structure exists; programs still generic and weakly tied to vision–mission. |
| 87 | RADITYA CHANDRAWINATA (64251541) | — | — |
| 88 | SUKKAYINAH (64251545) | 88 | Title: Telkom vs Digital Adaptation — Detailed mapping; needs tighter writing and sharper KPI-focused recommendations. |
| 89 | CLIFT DUCHESNAYE YORISMAN (64251568) | 84 | Title: “Business Management Paper (PLN)” — Relevant; lacks sharp keyword extraction and operational KPI/program examples. |
| 90 | RAMA ALFARIZKY (64251572) | — | — |
| 91 | MUHAMMAD RUSDIAWAN (64251592) | 86 | Title: “Vision–Mission Role in Supporting KAI Strategy” — Core components are aligned; needs stronger references for key claims. |
| 92 | KHALIFAH HAIDAR TSAQIB (64251594) | — | — |
| 93 | MUHAMMAD ARIQ FATTAH WIJAYA (64251614) | 70 | Title: Pertamina Vision–Mission Strategy — Drifts to theory/method; environment & function incomplete. |
| 94 | JOSUA SIMANJUNTAK (64251627) | — | — |
| 95 | MUHAMMAD KHOIF BILLAH (64251632) | — | — |
| 96 | DZAKWAN DWI RENDRAHADI (64251634) | — | — |
| 97 | DEBBY RAMADHANI (64251637) | 88 | Title: Telkom Vision–Mission Alignment — Complete and analytical; needs citation/format cleanup. |
| 98 | DESWITA ZAHRA (64251641) | 82 | Title: “BUMN Vision–Mission Alignment” — Structure exists; programs still generic and weakly tied to vision–mission. |
| 99 | MUHAMMAD ADITYA ANANDA RUSWANDI (64251649) | 88 | Title: Telkom Vision–Mission Alignment — Complete and analytical; needs citation/format cleanup. |
| 100 | SHINTA NURAINI ASSURA (64251650) | 88 | Title: Telkom vs Digital Adaptation — Strong environment and function detail; recommendations need measurable KPIs. |
| 101 | ALYA NAKHWAH KHASIBAH (64251682) | 84 | Title: “Business Management Paper (PLN)” — Relevant; still weak on sharp keyword extraction and operational KPI/programs. |
| 102 | KHOIRUNNISA RAMADHANTI (64251693) | 84 | Title: “Business Management Paper (PLN)” — Same pattern: relevant but needs operationalization and sharper extraction. |
| 103 | MUHAMAD ZACKY MIRZA ABDILAH (64251695) | 70 | Title: Pertamina Vision–Mission Strategy — Drifts to theory/method; incomplete environment & function sections. |
| 104 | GILBERT MARFRIS (64251701) | — | — |
| 105 | MARIA AURELIA LIMA (64251708) | 85 | Title: Alfamart Alignment Analysis — Meets components; needs stronger sourcing and deeper analytical development. |
| 106 | AISHA KHUMAIRA AULIA (64251738) | 88 | Title: Telkom Vision–Mission Alignment — Complete and analytical; needs citation/format cleanup. |
| 107 | ANNASTASYA MAULIA JUNIART (64251740) | 88 | Title: Telkom Vision–Mission Alignment — Complete and analytical; needs citation/format cleanup. |
| 108 | LOUISA SUKMA SANDRIYAN (64251749) | 88 | Title: Telkom vs Digital Adaptation — Very comprehensive but too long; needs stronger summary + KPI bullet points. |
| 109 | SARAH AULIA SIREGAR (64251762) | 85 | Title: Alfamart Alignment Analysis — Structured; needs stronger source proof and more analytical depth. |
| 110 | MUHAMMAD KAFKA DIVA HARAKI ALMUNAWAR (64251763) | 82 | Title: “BUMN Vision–Mission Alignment” — Structure exists; programs remain generic and not tightly linked to vision–mission. |
| 111 | RATU ANANDA FAUZIA (64251790) | 86 | Title: “Vision–Mission Role in Supporting KAI Strategy” — Solid structure; needs stronger evidence-based referencing. |
| 112 | FEBBRY NUR FATIHAH (64251801) | — | — |
| 113 | CHANDA WARDANA (64251809) | 87 | Title: Tokopedia Vision–Mission Alignment — Very complete and operational; needs stronger formal citation discipline. |
| 114 | SALWA AZ ZAHRA SUBYANTO (64251817) | 88 | Title: Telkom Vision–Mission Alignment — Complete and analytical; needs citation/format cleanup. |
| 115 | CHELSEAIMANIAT PUTRI ZEGA (64251820) | 85 | Title: Alfamart Alignment Analysis — Structured; needs stronger sourcing and more analytical development. |
| 116 | DIMAS AJI TRIYANTO (64251834) | 87 | Title: Tokopedia Vision–Mission Alignment — Complete and operational; needs stronger formal citation discipline. |
| 117 | ASHILA WAHYU RAMADHANI (64251841) | 80 | Title: Telkom Strategy Management Analysis — Relevant but incomplete on keyword extraction and competitor/regulator mapping. |
| 118 | DARREN ABELLINO HOTMATUA SINAGA (64251845) | — | — |
| 119 | MEITHA SOFIANI FARADILA (64251860) | 86 | Title: “Vision–Mission Role in Supporting KAI Strategy” — Solid structure; needs stronger referencing for claims/strategy points. |
| 120 | TYAN ADHI TRITAMA (64251867) | 87 | Title: Tokopedia Vision–Mission Alignment — Complete and operational; needs stronger formal citation discipline. |