RTM-3 (Monday Class) — Project Evaluation & Learning Notes

Paper Title: “Company Vision & Mission”
Course Format: Report Tugas Mandiri (RTM) — Outcome-Based Education (OBE)

This webpage is published to ensure every student can see their RTM-3 score, understand the main reason behind the score, and learn how to avoid common mistakes in academic writing and analytical reporting.

RTM is designed to train students to think critically, analytically, collaboratively, and to write in an academic style that meets formal standards. RTM-3 specifically focuses on analyzing the alignment of a company’s vision–mission with the business environment and organizational strategy, and producing operational and measurable improvement recommendations.


RTM General Requirements (Applied to RTM-3)

  • Team & roles: 4–6 students (leader, data analyst, writer, citation editor, presenter)
  • Format: DOC/PDF, A4, Times New Roman 12, 1.5 spacing, margins 3 cm (L) & 4 cm (K), page numbering, tables/figures include title & source
  • Length: 6–10 main pages (excluding cover, table of contents, references, appendices)
  • References: minimum 5 sources, mostly within the last 5 years, using one consistent style (APA / IEEE / Vancouver)
  • Submission: Google Form (one upload per team)
  • File name: RTM3_Class_TeamX_ShortTitle.pdf
  • Academic integrity: paraphrase properly, cite sources, similarity check encouraged
  • Late penalty: −5 points/day (max 2 days). More than 2 days = 0 (unless approved with valid proof)

Assessment Rubric (100%)

  • Structure 10%
  • Writing quality 10%
  • Introduction 15%
  • Data analysis & discussion 30%
  • Conclusion 10%
  • References & citation 10%
  • Timeliness 15%

Feedback Code System (So You Can Learn Faster)

Each student receives one main feedback code based on the assessor note. Use the code to know what you should fix first.

Code Dictionary

  • K1 — KPI needs to be sharper / measurable targets missing
    Your analysis is good, but KPIs should be quantified (targets, period, formula, and evidence).
  • K2 — References & citations need improvement
    Recency (≤5 years), citation consistency, weak sources, or bibliography not fully compliant.
  • K3 — Document hygiene issues
    Placeholders, missing sources for tables/figures, unclear evidence for numbers/claims.
  • K4 — Format/consistency not aligned with RTM instruction
    Formatting inconsistency, layout issues, inconsistent structure, missing RTM elements.
  • K5 — Writing & technical accuracy
    Typos, spelling, inconsistent terms, unclear labeling, or data presentation needs tidying.
  • K0 — Strong overall
    Meets rubric well; improvements are minor.

What High-Scoring RTM-3 Papers Usually Did Well

  • Explained vision–mission alignment using a clear logic chain: environment → strategy → internal capability → recommendation
  • Presented recommendations as operational actions, not only general statements
  • Included measurable KPIs (targets, time horizon, formula, evidence)
  • Used recent and credible references with consistent citation style
  • Ensured every numerical claim had a strong source (no unsupported “claims”)

RTM-3 Score Recap — Monday Class

NoNIMStudent NameFinal ScoreAssessor Note (Short)Code
164250007AL VICKY JULMANSYAH86.8UMKM object clear & relevant; KPI needs sharpening.K1
264250012ILMA FATIMAH88.0Complete structure & tech focus; minor spelling.K5
364250022KINANTI PUTRI RAHMANIA90.0Neat vision–mission analysis; tidy citations.K2
464250036RHAMADAN INDA ROBBI84.0Neat structure; check recency of references.K2
564250040KURNIA ILMA IKFIYAH90.0Very complete; numeric claims need stronger sources.K3
664250042MAESYAH NURAMELIA91.0Very complete; relevant references.K0
764250067JUWITA KHOIRULISA91.0Clear and consistent environment analysis.K0
864250073JAVANI NABHILA AZZAHRA91.0Digitalization argument is well-structured.K0
964250085ZEVANIA CHRIS ALLANT SARAGIH86.8UMKM object clear; KPI needs strengthening.K1
1064250087MARCELLA PRILIANTY88.0Strong conclusion; remove placeholders.K3
1164250097REI RAHMAN FAUDZI82.0KPIs & risks exist; formatting consistency needed.K4
1264250109DHEA CHAERINA ZULYANTI81.0≤5-year reference requirement not met.K2
1364250118ANDRA YANI91.0Appendices & references support integrity.K0
1464250126ZAHRA SALSABILA88.0Clear framework; minor spelling.K5
1564250128SINTYA SURYANI DEWI88.0Complete structure through KPI & implications.K0
1664250140CAMILA KANZA THETTA RAHIMAH90.0Logical flow; citation consistency.K2
1764250144AS SYAUKAN SRI DANO IMRON81.0Group score; same note.K4
1864250156RACHELIA FEBIYANTI81.0Program & KPI exist; citations inconsistent.K2
1964250177DANAR DWI ASTOMO87.0Method is explicit; argument fairly strong.K0
2064250181RIZKA ALIFIA NOVARINA88.0Clear phased implementation.K0
2164250187NOVITRIYANI DIRA SUPRIATNA81.0Group score; same note.K4
2264250212SITI ALFARISYA81.0Group score; same note.K4
2364250218RAIHAN AL ARROYAN87.0Clear structure & objectives.K0
2464250224NASYWA TAJALI AL’AIN88.0Minor spelling; clear framework.K5
2564250225MUHAMAD DHIMAS RAMADHANNI84.0Complete structure; writing accuracy.K5
2664250233ADINDA MAYSA89.0Logical analysis; minor citation issue.K2
2764250234SABRIANA89.0Ready for grading; tidy headings.K4
2864250241POPPY AGIS FIRZATULLAH88.0Risk analysis & mitigation present.K0
2964250242NATASYA ARYANTY82.0Group score; same note.K4
3064250243NADIRA RAHMADANI, SM82.0Group score; same note.K4
3164250245REVALIA ASSAN90.0Neat analysis; citation consistency.K2
3264250249NABILA SEPTI ROMADHONI86.8UMKM object relevant; KPI needs sharpening.K1
3364250252RENALDI PATI NGGUMBE84.0Clear structure; term consistency.K4
3464250255WINANSYAH86.8UMKM object clear; KPI needs sharpening.K1
3564250261ATHALLAH REHANDO EKA RADITYO87.0Method & steps are logical.K0
3664250270MUHAMMAD IVAN ZEIN84.0Complete structure; strengthen data evidence.K3
3764250288LAURA SYAHNANDA ZULFIA90.0Logical flow; citation consistency.K2
3864250302VALLIN AL ZAHARA88.0Strong analysis flow; KPI is present.K1
3964250319RISMIA ALDELIA PANE88.0Objectives & problem statement clear.K0
4064250337SHABILA MUSYAQINAH86.8UMKM object clear; KPI needs strengthening.K1
4164250341SYAFIQ NAUFAL AFANDI82.0Group score; same note.K4
4264250356SYIFAA ANNISA ZALFAA89.0Strong discussion; KPI needs quantification.K1
4364250362IRENE DWI ALIZA91.0Clean manuscript; ready for grading.K0
4464250383MUHAMMAD FAIDHLUL MA’ARIF87.0Systematic & consistent.K0
4564250400NADYA KHAIRANI90.0Clear public service vs efficiency focus.K0
4664250411DENAYLA FARENISA82.0Group score; same note.K4
4764250429SAFIRA NOVELIA88.0Remove placeholders; tidy citations.K3
4864250438CHELSY NACILA MELATI PUTRI JAYA88.0Complete and relevant structure.K0
4964250451IBNU RESTU SANTOSO84.0Strong conclusion; improve data presentation.K3
5064250463ZOYA NASHIFA SETIAWAN88.0Complete structure to appendices.K0
5164250471ERICK ADENIO88.0Only needs administrative finishing.K4
5264250472YULIA NUR SATRIANI90.0Very complete; strengthen claim integrity.K3
5364250474NANDA ZHAHWA KHOIRUNNISSA90.0Very complete; strengthen claim integrity.K3
5464250483ADINDA SALWA SYAHIRA88.0Structured content; KPI included.K1
5564250491DILLA ARLIANA89.0Complete structure; consistent references.K0
5664250492CHINTYA APRILIA PUTRI89.0Neat academic flow; minor typos.K5
5764250498INDIRA NARESA PUTRI90.0Very complete; claims need sources.K3
5864250500RASYA PUTRA RIZKYANTO87.0Complete structure; check data accuracy.K3
5964250511MELANI ZULQIA WARDANI90.0Very complete; consistent citations.K0
6064250543TALITHA SYIFA86.0Complete structure; reference consistency.K2
6164250556MAESYILA AZHARA88.0Analysis exists; spelling & references.K2
6264250563SALWA AMALINDA87.0Group score; typos & figure sources.K3
6364250566CHYNTHIA AFRILLIA82.0Equalized with Ilona Asvika.K4
6464250571NAZWA PUTRI NABILA81.0KPI needs numeric target/time period.K1
6564250583ASHILAH FATHIYYA NABILAH85.0Academic language & citations.K2
6664250588CINDY RAMADHANI RIEFWANTI90.6Vision–mission vs digital transformation analysis.K0
6764250609REZA ADI PUTRA90.0Strong KPI & implementation implications.K0
6864250611MARCELLA ALLIVIANI MULYONO TOBING82.0Complete structure; references 2019.K2
6964250614RIZQIKA PUTRI HUDANI86.0Argumentative; tidy writing.K5
7064250617NAYLA PUTRI RAHMA NOVIANTI88.0Analysis exists; spelling & references.K2
7164250644MUTIA DWI SABRINA90.0Complete structure; KPI needs strengthening.K1
7264250645RIZKA WIDYA PUSPITA82.0Complete structure; references 2019.K2
7364250657SITI NOVITA SARI85.0Ensure ≤5-year references.K2
7464250664SENIA DEWI PAMELA74.0References older than 5 years.K2
7564250665LINA AULIA74.0References older than 5 years.K2
7664250686SYAFIRA GHINA KHALILAH90.6Strong and consistent argumentation.K0
7764250687DWI PRASETYO90.0Strong cross-functional analysis.K0
7864250700NADINE SAYIDA RAHMAN90.0Strong PSO vs vision–mission analysis.K0
7964250722SHELVY SURYA ALLATHIIF90.0Complete structure; ready for grading.K0
8064250736SYELLEN BEAUTY LISTIANISA86.0Recommendations exist; final formatting.K4
8164250742MEYSIA AULIA PUTRI90.0Strong PSO vs vision–mission analysis.K0
8264250746FIRZA MALIKA CHATAMI SULAEMAN90.0Strong PSO vs vision–mission analysis.K0
8364250755DINAR KEIZIA NURAZIZAH87.0Group score; typos & figure sources.K3
8464250756MONICA SAPUTRI90.6Implementable phased recommendations.K0
8564250758ALYA SALMA KAMILA81.0KPI needs numeric target/time period.K1
8664250760FRANSISKUS SIMANULANG84.0Clear framework; typos & identity details.K5
8764250768ALYA SALSABILA90.6Strong vision–mission & KPI analysis.K0
8864250776ADE PUTRI AULIA90.0Strong PSO vs vision–mission analysis.K0
8964250781ZULAYKA LATIFA ZIHAN90.0Strong PSO vs vision–mission analysis.K0
9064250782AMANDHA ANNAS NATASYA85.0Tables/figures need clear sources.K3
9164250783NUR FANISAHILLA88.0Analysis exists; tidy formatting.K4
9264250796ZAHRA HUMAIRA82.0Complete structure; references 2019.K2
9364250823DIVA PUTRI AURELIA TRIYANTO90.0Complete structure; KPI needs strengthening.K1
9464250826MUHAMMAD RAFID RABBANI84.0Re-check NIM format.K4
9564250831SHEIRA MAULIDA PUTRI87.0Strong analysis; typos & KPI definition.K5
9664250833AYU SAFITRI87.0Group score; same note.K4
9764250834RAHMANIA TRIANI RAHMASARI86.0Standardize citations & bibliography.K2
9864250838DINDA OLIVIA90.0Clear case focus; KPI needs strengthening.K1
9964250853IRMA WATI74.0References older than 5 years.K2
10064250858RIZKY RAMADANA PUTRA90.0Strong conclusion & digital innovation.K0
10164250859MUHAMMAD ZIDNI FADHLANNo score/notes provided in the input.
10264250867ARINI REVALIA PUTRI86.0Citation consistency.K2
10364250869GHINA NAYLA ALFARAH87.0Group score; typos & figure sources.K3
10464250874MIA DWI SUSANTI85.0Method exists; references need tidying.K2
10564250901DINDA INTAN NURAINI84.0Group score; identity & spelling.K5
10664250914NUR SYIFA RAHMADONA85.5Implementation idea exists; analysis should be more concise.K4
10764250915FIRIYAL AZKIA90.6Neat business environment analysis.K0
10864250916LANYA SUBIYANTO85.0Bibliography format consistency.K2
10964250923SYAQIRA HERREL81.0KPI needs numeric target/time period.K1
11064250925NINDA ULYA RAHMA81.0KPI needs numeric target/time period.K1
11164250928FITA HANA KHAIRINA90.0Complete structure; KPI needs strengthening.K1
11264250934MUHAMAD REZA RAMADHAN90.0Functional evaluation & risk mitigation.K0
11364250940RAYA ACHMADIYOSO84.0Format and spelling consistency.K5
11464250941ALPI YANSYAH90.0Integration risk & cybersecurity.K0
11564250956DEVA AYU OCTAVIA RAMADHANI88.0Analysis exists; spelling & references.K2
11664250967CHAIRUNISA RAMADHANI88.7Neat structure; consistent citations.K0
11764250977SALWA FITRIYAH74.0References older than 5 years.K2
11864251420ILONA ASVIKA82.0Complete structure; references 2019.K2
11964251585SUCI RAMADHANI ISLAMI81.0KPI needs numeric target/time period.K1
12064251874NOVA MARIA ULFA88.0Ensure references meet requirements.K2

Students with Missing Score Data

  • 64250859 — MUHAMMAD ZIDNI FADHLAN: No score was provided in the input.